This nice view

This is very nice but it seems weird because at the top of the image, you get that sense of depth but you immediately lose it when you see the bottom of this image. I would give you a score of about 4.5/10. ( Please don't take any offense to this please )

Also, those metal red things seem only to have a 2D feel to it. I think it would of been better if you gave this view a more in-depth feel with a more 3D perspective, UNLESS; this is what you were aiming for..

However, this isn't my cup of tea for art, but nonetheless my friend; a nice starting piece for an artist I would say.

So, I now change my score from a 4.5/10 to a 2/10.

I believe if you take your time and patience and acquire more skill, your development of placement will be much better. I would watch you but I am going to wait to watch you until you become better. 

Thanks for your efforts anyways.